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My firework poem by Olivia

Golden rain might be falling towards me.

Rainbow fireworks ,

Exploding up into the clouds.

Stars up above the sky like diamonds.

Smoky yummy hot dogs making an enormous crowd.

Shiny bonfire is red, orange, yellow.

Children with their mums watching the fireworks.

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One Response to “My firework poem by Olivia”

  1. sthomas78
    4:59 pm on November 12th, 2013

    I like the way you compare stars to diamonds. Great simile.

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