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The Bear and The Hare by Paul

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December 18th, 2013 Posted 3:32 pm

Once upon a time there was a hare called Lewis and a bear called Paul. Lewis is cute, fluffy and soft. Paul is big, cute fluffy and soft.

One day Lewis and Paul went in the wood. Lewis jumped on Paul’s back they were in the middle of the wood. Next a snowflake fell on Paul’s fluffy and soft back.

Lewis’ soft ears fell down like a feather drifting from the sky. Paul was going to hibernate. Lewis was so so sad. Paul went to hibernate. Lewis had a great plan. He went to Paul’s cave and left a present there..

On Christmas day Paul saw Christmas, helped by Lewis.

The End

my firework poem part 2 by Ella C

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November 12th, 2013 Posted 4:52 pm

23. golden fireworks blasting in the air.

24. fireworks burning in the sky.

25. fireworks whizzing through the atmosphere.

26. bonfires zooming in the sky.

27. childrens shouting out noisily.

28. fireworks booming in the sky.

THE        END

My firework poem by Olivia

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November 12th, 2013 Posted 12:26 pm

Golden rain might be falling towards me.

Rainbow fireworks ,

Exploding up into the clouds.

Stars up above the sky like diamonds.

Smoky yummy hot dogs making an enormous crowd.

Shiny bonfire is red, orange, yellow.

Children with their mums watching the fireworks.

My fireworks poem by Emily

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November 12th, 2013 Posted 12:23 pm

fireworks zooming into the air slowly.

fire sparks spreading in the air.

so loud like a popcorn machine with the popcorn and with no lid .

whizzing rockets going to Neptune.

rockets whizzing to Mars.

fireworks keeping the sky bright.

racing fireworks in the night.

exciting rockets high in the sky.